Fiction: Diablos Danzantes de Yare. The dream. Horror story. Original content. ESP/EN.

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Daniel had recently arrived in Venezuela and decided to visit his aunt in the Valles del Tuy, an area near the city of Caracas.

When he arrived at the house, he greeted and hugged his uncles and cousins, since he had not seen them for a long time, and he was very happy to see how happy and excited they were in the house, since they were preparing for a traditional celebration of the city that was celebrated on the day of Corpus Christi and is called the Diablos Danzantes de Yare, which is a very important celebration for them and in addition to that he added to the joy of his visit to the house.

Daniel was fascinated to see the masks, which his uncle and cousins were going to use as dancers during the party.

When he got into conversation with his cousins about the holiday, he learned that his cousins firmly believed in the tradition and considered it sacred and true, and he couldn't help but tease them. He thought it was all just meaningless religious superstition.

His cousins, annoyed by his dismissive attitude, decided to confront him and told Daniel that his time away from Venezuela had caused him to lose his roots and his culture.

After that, they explained to him that the festival of the Dancing Devils of Yare was much more than a simple tradition, since it was the representation of a battle between good and evil at a cosmological level and that is why it was celebrated on the date of Corpus Christi, as a way of reaffirming faith and the triumph of light over darkness, in all areas.

Intrigued and challenged by his cousins' conviction, Daniel decided to accept their invitation to attend the traditional dance the next day, and after a joyful family gathering, they all went to bed early, to be ready for the festivity.

When Daniel was fast asleep, he was haunted by a terrifying nightmare, which made him sweat and shiver like a baby. In his dream, he was surrounded by demons that surrounded him, screamed at him, whispered strange phrases and he witnessed, as he was carried and pushed by the demons, the horror of hell.

Daniel. He felt the demons grab his legs and tear his arms in his sleep, he felt fear invade every pore and cell of his body and felt his sweat soak the bed as he struggled to wake up, unable to do so, as a demon, whom he called the greater demon, held him down and would not let him wake up, but rather subdued him and put him at the disposal of the lesser demons.

Already, when it seemed that the demons were going to drag Daniel to the depths of the underworld, suddenly some drums began to be heard resounding in his dream.

But in the dream, the greater demon, as well as the other demons and Daniel himself, turned to where the sound of the drums was coming from.

That gave Daniel a terrible fear, since at that moment, he did not know if what he was experiencing was a dream or something real, and within himself he felt a terrible fear and terror, and when he felt that, he saw how the image of the greater demon, which he now believed to be the devil, became bigger and stronger, which terrified Daniel much more.

However, the drums were still beating in the dream, and now the devil was seen to be uncomfortable at times, and the sound was getting louder and louder, as he turned to where the sound was coming from and both the devil and Daniel saw several men appear dressed in the masks of the Dancing Devils, dancing and singing.

As the dancers approached Daniel in his dream, the lesser demons, visibly frightened of the dancers' path, moved away.

In a moment of distress, the devil lifted Daniel by the neck, and as the devil was about to choke him and throw him into the pit of hell, the dancers surrounded the demon and began to sing and play their maracas and drums in fury.

As they did so, the devil began to shudder and feel pain, because these sacred sounds, together with the singing and dancing, produced unbearable pain to the devil, who finally let go of Daniel in the midst of the agony they were causing him.

At that instant, Daniel's aunt shook him tenderly to wake him up. The young man, dazed and terrified, jumped out of bed, screaming in fear and discomfort. His aunt, worried, asked him what had happened to him and he, still trembling, told her about his nightmare.

After the whole family woke up and had a comforting breakfast, they all went to the festival of the Diablos Danzantes de Yare.

Daniel walked the entire dance route with his family and friends, watching the dances, listening to the drums, the maracas and the lyrics of the songs, which were the same as in his dream, which terrified him a lot, since it was the first time he was in that festivity.

Daniel was amazed to see the devotion and fervor of all those present, who exuded an air of unity with all the participants and dancers of the tradition.

After that day, Daniel stopped having nightmares and bad dreams, and that led him to study and appreciate the folklore and traditions of his country.

This led him to understand that all traditions have a deep meaning and beauty that cannot be ignored, and that they are the basis of the popular culture of countries and regions.

In addition, he learned to respect and value the beliefs of others, because he never knew if behind them, there was a powerful secret capable of awakening the darkest fears that could be imagined.

Thank you for reading me.


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Ficción: Diablos Danzantes de Yare. El sueño. Cuento de terror Contenido Original. ESP/EN.


Daniel, había llegado hace poco a Venezuela y decidió ir a visitar a su tía en los Valles del Tuy, una zona cercana a la ciudad de Caracas.

Al llegar a la casa, saludo y se abrazó con sus tíos y primos, ya que tenía mucho tiempo sin verlos, y él quedó muy contento al ver lo alegre y emocionados que estaban en la casa, puesto que se encontraban preparándose para una fiesta tradicional de la ciudad que se celebraba el día de Corpus Cristi y que se llama los Diablos Danzantes de Yare, la cual es una celebración muy importante para ellos y además de eso se sumó a la alegría de su visita a la casa.

Daniel se quedó fascinado al ver las máscaras, que su tío y primos iban a usar como bailarines durante la fiesta.

Cuando él se puso a conversar con sus primos sobre la festividad, se enteró de que sus primos creían firmemente en la tradición y la consideraban sagrada y verdadera, y él no pudo evitar burlarse de ellos. Pensaba que todo eso era solo una superstición religiosa sin sentido.

Sus primos, molestos por su actitud despectiva, decidieron confrontarlo y le dijeron a Daniel que su tiempo fuera de Venezuela, le habían hecho perder sus raíces y su cultura.

Después de eso, le explicaron que la fiesta de los Diablos Danzantes de Yare era mucho más que una simple tradición, ya que era la representación de una batalla entre el bien y el mal a nivel cosmológico y por eso se celebraba en la fecha del Corpus Christi, como una manera de reafirmar la fe y el triunfo de la luz sobre la oscuridad, en todos los ámbitos.

Intrigado y desafiado por la convicción de sus primos, Daniel decidió aceptar su invitación para asistir al baile tradicional al día siguiente, y después de una alegre reunión familiar, todos se fueron a dormir temprano, para estar listos para la festividad.

Cuando Daniel estaba profundamente dormido, fue acechado por una pesadilla aterradora, que lo hizo sudar y temblar como un bebé. En su sueño, se vio rodeado de demonios que lo rodeaban, le gritaban, le susurraban frases extrañas y presenció, al ser llevado y empujado por los demonios, el horror del infierno.

Daniel. Sentía cómo los demonios le agarraban las piernas y le desgarraban los brazos en su sueño, él sentía como el miedo le invadía cada poro y célula de su cuerpo y sentía como su sudor empapaba la cama mientras luchaba por despertar, sin poder hacerlo, ya que un demonio, al que llamaba el demonio mayor, lo sostenía y no le dejaba despertar, sino que más bien lo sometía y ponía a disposición de los demonios menores.

Ya, cuando parecía que los demonios iban a arrastrar a Daniel a las profundidades del averno, de repente se empezaron a escuchar unos tambores resonando en su sueño.

Pero en el sueño, tanto el Demonio mayor, como los otros demonios y el mismo Daniel, voltearon hacia donde venía el sonido de los tambores.

Eso le dio un miedo terrible a Daniel, ya que en ese momento, no sabía si lo que vivía era un sueño o era algo real y dentro de sí sintió un miedo y un terror terrible, y al sentir eso, vio como la imagen del demonio mayor, que ahora él creía que era el diablo, se hacía más grande y fuerte, lo que le aterraba a Daniel mucho más.

Sin embargo, los tambores seguían sonando en el sueño, y ahora se veía al diablo incómodo en algunos momentos, y el sonido se hacía más y más fuerte, al voltear hacia donde venía el sonido y ambos, tanto el diablo como Daniel, vieron aparecer a varios hombres vestidos con las máscaras de los Diablos Danzantes, danzando y cantando.

A medida que los bailarines o danzantes, se acercaban a Daniel en su sueño, los demonios menores, se alejaban visiblemente asustados del trayecto de los bailarines.

En un momento de angustia, el diablo levantó por el cuello a Daniel, y cuando el diablo estaba a punto de asfixiarlo y lanzarlo al pozo del infierno, los bailarines rodearon al demonio y comenzaron a cantar y tocar sus maracas y tambores con furia.

Al hacer eso, el diablo empezó a estremecerse y sentir dolor, debido a que estos sonidos sagrados, unido a los cantos y bailes, le producían un dolor insoportable al diablo, quien finalmente soltó a Daniel en medio de la agonía le provocaban.

En ese instante, la tía de Daniel lo sacudió con ternura para despertarlo. El joven, aturdido y aterrado, se levantó de un salto de la cama, soltando gritos de temor e incomodidad. Su tía, preocupada, le preguntó qué le había ocurrido y él, aún tembloroso, le contó su pesadilla.

Después de despertarse toda la familia y tomar un reconfortante desayuno, se fueron todos a la festividad de los Diablos Danzantes de Yare.

Daniel recorrió la ruta del baile completamente con su familia y amigos, viendo los bailes, escuchando los tambores, las maracas y las letras de las canciones, las cuales eran iguales a las de su sueño, lo cual le aterró bastante, dado que era la primera vez que estaba en esa festividad.

Daniel quedó asombrado, al ver la devoción y el fervor de todos los presentes, que emanaban un aire de unidad con todos los participantes y bailarines de la tradición.

Después de ese día, Daniel dejó de tener pesadillas y malos sueños, y eso hizo que él se adentrara en el estudio y la apreciación del folclore y las tradiciones de su país.

Eso lo llevo a comprender, que todas las tradiciones tienen un profundo significado y una belleza que no se puede ignorar, y que son la base de la cultura popular de los países y regiones.

Además, aprendió a respetar y valorar las creencias de los demás, pues nunca sabía si detrás de ellas, había un poderoso secreto capaz de despertar los miedos más oscuros que se pudiesen imaginar.

Gracias por leerme.


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Hi @osomar357. The image you chose is from flickr, which is not a license-free site. Please remove this image and replace with one from a creative commons or license free website such as Pixabay, Unsplash or Pexels. Thank you.

By the way, if you Google "are flickr images free to use," you will see this result:

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Hello @theinkwell, happy Monday.
I already changed the image.
I put that image that you asked me to remove, because I searched for images without copyright in the search engine and that image appeared.
Sorry for the mistake.
Greetings.

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It was such an interesting read. The dream Daniel had was to teach him how to value his culture. Indeed, every culture is unique and must be respected.

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Hi @iskawrites, I'm glad you liked the story.
Yes we should respect all cultures, since none is better than another, because each one comes from its own cultural background.
Thank you for your comment.

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This is a very compelling story, @osomar357. It is very well told, and you did a great job of building suspense. The dream within the story serves an excellent purpose, creating terror that is fortunately not played out in real life, but helps to deepen Daniel's respect for tradition and lore.

Thank you for fixing your image, and for joining the mask prompt and commenting on the work of other community members.

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This is a very compelling story, @osomar357. It is very well told, and you did a great job of building suspense. The dream within the story serves an excellent purpose, creating terror that is fortunately not played out in real life, but helps to deepen Daniel's respect for tradition and lore.

Thank you for fixing your image, and for joining the mask prompt and commenting on the work of other community members.

Hello @theinkwell, happy evening.
I'm glad you liked the text, I actually wanted to put it together before the last day, but I was pressed for time.
Sorry about the image, I'll try not to let it happen anymore.
Best wishes and thanks for the comment.

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I really enjoyed your story, @osomar357. It has some very creepy and frightening elements, but does not cross the line into violence or gore that so many horror stories seem to do. You created suspense and fear, but ended the story very nicely in the "real world" where Daniel is safe among his family and friends.

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I really enjoyed your story, @osomar357. It has some very creepy and frightening elements, but does not cross the line into violence or gore that so many horror stories seem to do. You created suspense and fear, but ended the story very nicely in the "real world" where Daniel is safe among his family and friends.

Hello, happy evening @jayna.
Thanks for the comment.
You know when I do the stories, I always try to leave something, happy and positive in them.
Sometimes it costs me a little, but whenever I get stuck looking for an ending, I tell myself, "The world is very hard for many people, so instead of entrenching that thought with a gloomy or hopeless ending, look for something that gives hope, or a teaching" or something like that, the important thing for me is that people enjoy what I write and that there is always a message at the end.
Although there are times when I don't achieve it.
Best wishes.

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That is an admirable goal, @osomar357. For me, as a reader, I look for an ending that is satisfying and makes the story worth reading, even if it is not a happy ending. When the story is both satisfying and happy at the end, that’s a double bonus. 😁

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It was a pleasure to read this, especially as there are important lessons within. Even though there were barely any dialogues, I think it's an interesting story. Plaudits!

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