An unforgettable Night ||| Creative Nonfiction Prompt

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Like every other Twilight, slightly between the sunset and the dark, I sat on my studying chair in an uncompleted building next to our student lodge.

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The breeze was pleasantly calming and soothing my skin, which helped with what I was studying, to assimilate so well. I had been there for quite some time, about two hours or so, studying for a paper I had the following morning. It was such a productive evening for me.

There was this confidence I felt inside, knowing that I had fully prepared for my exam coming up. I was able to cover all the important areas of the subject. That night wouldn't have been short of a perfect night if not for the event that followed immediately.

I raised and made my way to the lodge, to take my shower before retiring to bed, but just before I shot the door of my room I heard some loud and disturbing noise coming towards our lodge from the main road.

I tried to make sense of the incoming noise, it became louder and closer to our lodge and I was still lost to what might have been the cause of the noise.

Before I knew what was happening, some of my fellow students in the lodge who were still hanging outside and taking in fresh air rushed inside the compound, and immediately closed our gate.

One among them called Tunde was barely able to explain what was going on outside, breathing heavily as he struggled to catch his breath.

He explained to us that some political thugs on the main road had clashed with some bike riders, they were burning tires, fomenting trouble with incoming vehicles and some of them had started making their way toward our street, with all sorts of dangerous weapons in their hands.

One scary thing about the part of the country where I schooled is that, once there happens to be a riot in the town, the none indigene living there, which are mainly students and traders, become a soft target, because of undertone hatred breeds from ignorance, cultural and religious differences.

Because of this, we always take extra caution whenever there is an issue in town. You never know who could fall victim to their atrocities.

My younger brother, a freshman at my school who was staying with me at the lodge, called me a little bit earlier that he was on his way back from an evening class. I tried reaching him immediately so he could stay back inside the school premises till everything calmed down to no avail.

As much as I was trying to stay calm it wasn't easy, I knew he was smart and would most likely get himself somewhere safe but, not being able to speak to him made the whole situation worse. I kept on checking my phone hoping to see his incoming call while I dialed his line concurrently with no luck.

I said a short prayer, silently, telling God to keep him safe, wherever he was.

We were so nervous, we knew we couldn't stay inside, it wasn't safe. An incident that happened a week back let us know that staying inside the house even with our gate locked was a suicide mission.

The previous week, a similar incident happened. The gate of the students living in a house away from ours was destroyed in the process, when those tugs attacked them, it took prompt intervention from the local police to save those students from being injured or something worse could have happened to them.

As we were still inside, contemplating on running to hide inside the bush opposite our house, at least they wouldn't suspect us of being hiding there, till the police probably came around, or they failed to locate us and go back to wherever they would come from. The lousy noise was drawing closer every second, my legs were shaking and my heart was pounding like a runner for a country race.

The eight of us in the compound decided to lock our rooms, put on our shoes, and get ready to dash into the thick bush in the opposite direction of our house for safety, after some of us were able to put calls through to some of our friends living in the school hostel asking them for help, to the student affairs officer and the local police.

Just then, the calls we made for help early yields or probably the local police were on high alert for any trouble all along, we heard the siren of the police car approaching from the main road. What a relief the sound of their vehicles brought to us.

Less than a minute later, they all seemed to have run back, then disappeared into thin air.

My younger brother came back to the lodge about thirty minutes later, his phone battery had died, which explains why I couldn't reach him. He had gone back to the school hostel like I had thought and let the noise die down before coming back to join us.

The following morning, I felt a bit more of myself from the previous night's ordeal and I was able to perform well in my exam.

We heard that some of those bad guys were caught by the police and were held to face the music of their atrocities.

It has been over ten years but the memory of that night is still very fresh in my mind. It was truly an unforgettable night, an experience I don't wish on anyone.



This is my entry into this week's #creativenonfiction In the Inkwell community

Thank you so much for visiting my blog and for your support, do have a great time at your end.
@funshee



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Wow Funshee, I am so sorry. I haven't been in such a situation like this but I can imagine what you had to go through.

I am so sorry my !LUV✨✨

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Thank you dear🥰🙏 it has been along time now, I'm just glad we all came out safe.

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This is well told, @funshee. We feel the danger as you describe events unfolding. We are surprised by the hostility that exists around students. Indeed, it is ignorance that causes such animosity. Running into the bush--this does not sound like a good alternative, and yet it is the only one available to you.

Added to your anxiety about your own safety, is your fear for your brother. Where is he?

A good job in writing. Your piece is full of descriptive details. One thing, though, there are in the story instances of misspelled or misused words (Exs: tugs--do you mean thugs? and fermenting--do you mean fomenting?) Nonetheless this is an effective piece and certainly does address the prompt.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Added to your anxiety about your safety, is your fear for your brother. Where is he?

My brother was away to study in an evening class and was supposed to be on his way back to the lodge during the whole incident.

Exs: tugs--do you mean thugs? and fermenting--do you mean fomenting.

Yes, I was meant to write thugs and fomenting, respectively.

I will pay more attention to my use of words next time.

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment and nice words about my story. !LUV

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Your post is amazing, I really enjoyed visiting your post, thank you very much for presenting us a very nice post.

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I'm glad to know you enjoy my story, thank you very much for visiting, do have an amazing day🥰🙏😊

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I can only imagine how worried you were as you couldn't reach your brother.

Thankfully, the authorities intervened just in time.

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It was indeed a scary experience, but I'm glad the local police came just in time to salvage the situation.

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There are events such as the one you shared with us that happen in our lives that change us forever. Retelling your story had to take you back to a place and time of utmost fear. I cannot begin to imagine how each second felt like an eternity for you and your fellow students as you hid and waited for the police to arrive. Thank God everything turned out well and nobody was hurt. I hope you don't have nightmares or panic attacks from the experience @funshee

!HUG !LUV !PIZZA !LADY

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Somehow describing this type of tough experience has a way of making me feel better, like I thought I already forgotten about it, then I read a post somewhere of someone sharing her similar experience and it all came back to me.

But writing about it makes me feel like, a hidden pain has just healed and I have this wonderful platform who don't judge us for the things we have been through but offer a heartfelt support to thank for that and for wonderful people like you who read my story and dropped me a beautiful comment. Thank you very much.

I am glad, we all came out unhurt thankfully. And for nightmares, I sleep better at night nowadays.

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@tipu curate 3

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Thank you very much @ninahaskin !LUV

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This must have been a really terrifying experience. A friend shared something similar but in his case, they had already given him a machete in preparation to attack.

I am glad your brother and yourself and your lodge mate came out unharmed from the incident.

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It took us unprepared and unexpectedly, so we had nothing at hands we could defend ourselves with. Things could have turn bad very fast, but I'm glad it doesn't and we were all okay.

Thank you Dear @wongi for your words, have a great day at your end. 🥰🙏❤

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It is always my pleasure dearest,

Have an equally amazing day.

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So sorry dear, you can't easily forget such incidents even when it's so many years gone, thank God no life was lost in the process

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I feel like I just watched a movie because your post is quite captivating and I could picture the whole thing.💫

We also experience that here in South Africa where non-indigenes or different tribes are easy targets in situations like this. It's great that you guys were all safe at the end, and your younger brother was safe too.

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Thank you very much @humbe

It can be very sad when some groups of people let things like tribe, religion, or skin color come in between them.

When in truth there are a lot more things that we all have in common that should unite us and make us stronger 💪

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You're welcome @funshee.😊

True, I couldn't agree more!🌸

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Have you been very busy at your end? You haven't posted in a minute, you are such a cool writer you should try and post more. !LUV

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Thank you Funshee😊, I will try to keep a balance and post again.

!PIZZA

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You are welcome 🥰😊, I will look forward to that

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