RE: Spirited efforts
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Your teacher was wise. Working to our own satisfaction is all we can ask of ourselves. We know when we have failed at that, and we know when we have done our very best. It was fortunate that you could hear the wisdom of your teacher, and that you could respond to it.
Your piece has a good arc. It has good descriptions of your emotions and of events. We understand your motivation in the story, and that is important.
Thank you for sharing this with us, @lightpen.
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He was a great teacher. Luckily for me again, I am back to work under him for my postgraduate studies. Thank you @theinkwell.