Old Memories And Doubt [Fiction]

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Allen Deacon was in Ariel, Suffolk county.

He shouldered his duffel bag. Eyes darting left and right, he hailed a cab and once it stopped in front of him, he jumped into it. As the car drove through the neat and quaint village of Ariel, the feel of warm sunlight mingling with a cool breeze on his skin welcomed him into the heart of the countryside.

He missed his home so much. Yet anxiety stole the heartwarming feeling from him. If only the circumstances were different and he was truly coming home for a visit.

He tried to stay calm but unconsciously tapped his fingers on his thighs. Then he remembered switching off his phone on the plane. He turned it on. Within seconds, it pinged and the screen displayed a jiggling envelope. He sucked in a breath and tapped it open.

Mr Deacon,
Joline Matthews was found dead in her apartment. I'm not sure if you know this. Give me a call. This is urgent.
— Delano.

Shit!

The cab driver glanced at him through the rearview mirror. "We are almost there, sir."

"Sure,” Allen said quickly, remonstrating himself for the vulgar utterance. “It's alright….wait!"

The cab driver slowed and pulled the car to the side of the dusty road. He turned, casting a concerned glance at Allen.

“I'm sorry. Just give me a few minutes, please,” he said and slowly stepped out of the car, leaving the passenger door open.


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There were parched, brown grasses on the side of the road, swaying gently to the call of the wind. Gazing through the grasses, the sight of an old, two-storey farmhouse in the distance made him smile. When he was a young boy, he would stop by the roadside and admire his family house before running through the grass to get there. His mother would often tell him to take the tarred road, but he would argue that it's longer to get home.

He sighed, got back into the cab and they got back on the road.

Twenty minutes later, Allen paid the cab driver with a generous tip and waited until he reversed the cab, tires screeching and kicking up dust, and drove away.

A tranquil silence enveloped the landscape presented before him. He gazed at the winding road that curved up to the family house surrounded with vibrant wildflowers that danced in the gentle breeze.

But now it was his aunt's house.

The entrance door swung open and a middle-aged woman in a multicoloured flower dress with eyeglasses stepped out with a big smile. She spread out her arms. Allen returned the smile and moved into her embrace.

"Now, if it isn't my dear nephew come to visit me," Safira Deacon said sweetly. Allen held her tight, the scent of coconut and flowers filling his nose. He was home, the same place where he grew up after his parents passed away when he was ten.

After unpacking his things in his old room, Delano began to call his phone. He picked up.

"Detective."

"Mr Deacon. Finally! I understand you are out of the city. Is it a work thing?"

"Uh, yes. It's work. I'll be back in a week, two weeks tops."

"I'm afraid you'll have to make it earlier than that or tell me where you are. I can come to you."

"Detective, I can't…."

"Mr Deacon, don't make this hard on yourself. Your prints were found in Joline's apartment. You are an upstanding citizen and that's why I'm giving you the courtesy of this heads-up."

Allen Deacon gripped his phone tight, his knuckles pale. "I did not kill her!" He whispered into the phone then blanched when he realised his secret was out. His aunt, Safira, stood by the door, looking perplexed. "I…sorry, I'll have to call you back."

"Deacon!" Delano's voice was loud enough for Safira to hear as Allen ended the call.

"It's not what you think, Auntie," he whispered.

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What I See

Parched grasses on a wide land and a big building, like a farmhouse in a distance

What I Feel

Nostalgia

I hope you enjoyed reading this short story. It's an excerpt from a longer story I'm currently working on and the above picture conveyed the exact image I had in my head of this scene when I was writing. It's uncanny, in a good way!

This is my entry to A Picture is Worth A Thousand Words. To participate, click on the link.

Thank you for visiting my blog.

Image 1: cottonbro
Image 2: @wakeupkitty



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I feel he killed her....

My Reason?

Marriage is hard...

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Marriage is hard...

😳😆 What marriage? lol. Happy new year!

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😂😂😂 Happy New year

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If aunt knows him...
It's not what I think but I am eagerly waiting to read the rest of the story.

Thank you for joining pic1000. 👍

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Hopefully Allen Deacon's aunt stands up for him if the evidence is against him. I'm looking to finish the story soon. Thanks so much for reading. 🙂

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Good story! I understand nostalgia, especially now that I have moved back to my hometown and live in my Aunt and Uncle's house. I can see my childhood home from my front porch now.

So he really didn't kill her?

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So he really didn't kill her?

Well, so he says. By the end of the story, we'll know if he was telling the truth or hiding something! Hehe. Thanks so much for reading.

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It's really uncanny in a good way. I hope he wasn't the killer. He looks innocent because everyone one is a suspect in a murder case.

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I'm hoping Deacon's not the killer in this story but let's see how I feel when writing the concluding part. Thanks so much for your visit. 🙂

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A twist will surely blow our mind. Hehe. Thanks for sharing.

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Ohhhhhhhhhh
I await the continuation of this story

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Detectives work can be brain cracking and involves a lot.

I think he killed her.

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Well, soon enough we'll know if Deacon killed the victim in the story. Thanks so much for reading. !LADY 🙂

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Alright dear.
You are welcome.
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Kemmy! You left us hanging... without warning!! !LOLZ Thoroughly enjoyed this opening chapter - looking forward to the rest when it is ready. I loved the nostalgia - it put me right in the heart of his memories. Good writing! !LUV !ALIVE !PIZZA

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😄 The cliffhanger wasn't intentional! Once I saw the contest image, I had to drop this part of the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love nostalgic scenes in a story and the image gives that vibe. Thanks so much for visiting. !LADY

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