Adieu, Carter || The Ink Well Monthly Contest

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Carter pressed a tiny button on his wrist as the Breville deluxe espresso machine hummed in the kitchen. The tiny button dipped inside the plastic panel on his wrist, clicked and a rectangular screen appeared. He checked the weather forecast for the day: 31°C, Precipitation - 10%, Humidity - 70%, Wind - 6 km/h with an 80% possibility of a storm.

The espresso machine chimed that the coffee was ready. Carter filled up four mugs, poured steamed milk from the frothing pitcher and designed a heart on each coffee. He placed the mugs on a tray and carried them into a computer lab.

Via electronic eye recognition, the door hissed and slid open. In a white room with machines of different sizes spread on tables sat two men and two women, their heads bowed and eyes glued to computer screens.

The tall, bearded and dark-skinned male with a pleasant smile glanced at Carter. "Yo, Carter. It's that time already?"

"Yes, Moreno. Your energy levels are depleting and you need this shot of caffeine to stay alert for the next three hours and twenty-three minutes."

A slender female with an olive skin tone picked a mug and raised it in a cheer. "Good work, Carter."

"Thank you, Sharon."

Moreno, and the second female called Brent, brown-skinned and plump, took their coffees and went back to their screens.

The second male and leader of the group, Asian, five feet tall, stern looking and plump slid his revolving chair from his screen to the microscope on the next table. He peered into the lens and stayed thus. Carter walked up to him and placed his mug beside his computer.

"Your espresso, Chang."

Chang gave him a thumbs up and continued looking through the microscope.

"One more thing," Carter said. "There's an 80% possibility of a storm between the hours of 17.05 pm and 19.20 pm later today."

"Thank you, Carter," Moreno mumbled as he sipped his coffee, his eyes on his screen.

Carter swivelled and marched to where his small desk was located in a far corner of the lab. He sat and disengaged, a beeping sound, alerting the four software engineers that Carter had fallen into sleep mode.

"He's getting old," Chang muttered, still peering into the microscope. "Maybe a replacement?"

"Yea. Sonex has this improved droid that's faster than our Carter here. They offered to give us one for a testing period and if we find it suitable, we make a down payment," said Moreno.

Chang shook his head. "I know the one. Their droid is made of the latest unit from Cosmo Robotics in Japan. We'll simply get the unit and build ours."

"And Carter?" Sharon whispered.

Brent turned to shoot her colleague a withering glance. "Why are you whispering? He's in sleep mode until the next item on his schedule which is in," she paused and checked her wristwatch, "about two hours. Please speak freely."

"I don't know. Carter's been with us for so long and we've come to rely on him for everything. We call it 'him' for Pete's sake!" Sharon mused in a whisper.

Chang and Moreno chuckled.

"I mean it, guys. Do we have to replace him?"

Carter's index finger jerked for a second where he sat but none of the engineers noticed.

"Carter is simply a droid. He doesn't have feelings, so it's all good," Chang replied.

"I'm gonna miss him—" Sharon said but Brent's scoff cut her off.

The engineers worked in silence for an hour when the rumble of thunder in the sky alerted them to the storm. Chang looked at his watch and glanced at the windows. The sky was darkening.

"It's just 3.24 pm. I think the storm may be starting sooner than we expected," Chang noted. Almost immediately, the winds began to blow, shaking the windows and doors. The engineers refused to be distracted after all they were sheltered in a fortified, state-of-the-art building….

A flash of lightning quickly followed by a loud clap of thunder shook the building immediately causing a power blackout.

"What just happened?" Sharon yelled.

"Calm down, guys," Moreno said, switching on his phone's flashlight. "I'm sure the backup electricity will soon switch—" He didn't finish his statement before another lightning and thunder tore through the building, shattering the glass windows and letting in the rain.

The ladies screamed from the force of the breaking windows and fell on the white marble floor before scurrying on their hands and knees to find hiding spots.

Chang and Moreno, their bodies soaked wet, began to move the tables and computers to the far corner of the lab where Carter's desk was because it was untouched by the rain. They froze when they saw Carter's chair empty.

"Where is he?" Chang shouted above the howl of the wind.

"Look!" Moreno pointed.

The engineers stood and watched through the broken windows as Carter marched out of the lab onto the lawn area before the iron-wrought gate.

Carter turned, the light on his forehead blinked green, indicating he was in active mode. He gazed at the four shocked engineers, gave them a stiff bow and turned to walk out of the gate.

"Brent, turn it off. Now!" Chang commanded, his hair and face dripping wet from the rain.

"I can't. My system is damaged," she pointed to her flat screen displaying rainbow colours in wavering patterns where it was cracked.

Sharon smiled slightly. "I told you, he may have feelings. Adieu, Carter."

The three engineers scowled at her.

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Bang, I did it again... I just rehived your post!
Week 162 of my contest just started...you can now check the winners of the previous week!
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Carter is the android we all deserve, hopefully he won't cause some apocalyptic mayhem later :) Fun story to read as this android and his owners grapple with human feelings and emotions artificially generated.

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Carter is the android we all deserve...

I couldn't agree more! After posting this story, I began to admire Carter and wished I had one—loyal and dedicated. I wouldn't change him at all! 😄

This is me trying a little sci-fi and I'm pleased you found it a fun read. I know how much you love all things sci-fi! !PIMP

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This is me trying a little sci-fi and I'm pleased you found it a fun read.

It was fun. I always like to see how authors tackle some thorny issues that we'll be encountering soon. Your modern style of writing fits right in with the genre. Have you ever seen the movie A.I. (2001). I recommend it if you haven't.

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Thanks for the movie recommendation. I'll go search for it! 🙂

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Wow, Carter though a droid had feelings and perhaps freedom eventually for him, thanks to the strike by lightning and thunder

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Yes, he understood the concept of freedom and left under the cover of the storm. Thanks so much for your visit. !PIZZA 🙂

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Carter no try 😂😂😂😂😂
Isn't that ranked as treachery?

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Treachery when his existence is on the line! 😄 I'll advise him to walk away, if he didn't know how to. Hehe. Thanks a lot for reading. !PIZZA

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You bring us such a poignant tale which explores the aspect of sentience in AI in a very sensitive and heartfelt manner. With one finger gesture, you make us fall in love with Carter. He adds hearts to the foam in their coffees because he cares about them, not simply because he is programmed to do so. In the end he leaves because, like human beings, it is easier to leave than be left. Beautifully crafted story exploring an android's connection with humanity. It brought a lump to my throat.

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Thank you for this heartfelt and lovely comment. Your kind feedback is greatly appreciated. 😊

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This was so intense. Like the guy literally draws hearts on your coffee, what more did they want?
I feel bad for Carter and even more for them since they might never get a better replacement.
This was such a scintillating play on sci-fi. Really loved it.💕

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Like the guy literally draws hearts on your coffee....

I tell you! Wish I had a droid like that, I'll keep it forever. 😄 Thanks so much for reading. !LADY

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Congratulations on winning the June fiction contest with this lovely story, @kemmyb. (And apologies for the incorrect memo. It should have said the "monthly fiction contest," not the "weekly fiction contest.")

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No worries! 🙂 Thank you for the recognition and the opportunity to participate in the contest.

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