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RE: THE DEAL OF A LIFE TIME
That's a great story, @kilvnrex. You use dialogue wonderfully. The only thing missing is quotation marks. The dialogue, however, is quite convincing. If you set it off with quotations readers will find it easier to follow.
Nice job.
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Thank you, I will the corrections with the quotation