poetry for the flame 🔥 PSYCHOPATH ENG/FRE

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poetry for the flame

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psychopath

There was nothing in your voice
Just an echo lost among the mountains
No color, no beauty, no miracle
You were naked, hiding
Fragile in armor
Alone and full of noise
Love will never have crossed your threshold
Your ego lit up your sky
Your whispers were empty
Your screams were incomprehensible
You saw only yourself in the mirror
And the others as objects holding it at arm's length
Then the image burned and your lie dissipated like
a fog that we curse at the dawn of a new day.

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psychopath

il n'y avait rien dans ta voix
juste un echo perdu parmis les montagnes
aucune couleur, aucune beauté, aucun miracle
tu etais nu en te cachant
fragile avec une armure
seul et pleins de bruits
l'amour n'aura jamais passé ton seuil
ton ego illuminait ton ciel
tes murmures etaient vides
tes cris etaient incomprehensibles
tu ne voyais que toi dans le miroir
et les autres en objets qui le tenaient à bout de bras
puis l'image a brulée et ton mensonge c'est dissipé comme
un brouillard que l'on maudit à l'aurore d'un nouveau jour.

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opidia

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This poem reminded me of two things. The first is a silly character from a video game called Final Fantasy IX (Nine) ;P called Steiner. He's a night. He's a goofball. He clanks around in his armour, and worries about the princess he is meant to protect. He worries about her so much, he comes along willingly when she gets abducted, because he doesn't really trust the kidnappers to look after her properly.

fragile in armor

And to all extents, fragile in any costume or outfit - the business man in his suit, the woman in her red dress, powerful, empowered, - full of statements and intent, but ultimately trembling behind a tenuous sense of agency.

The second thing that it reminded me of was a song called Feint by a band called Epica, which has the lyrics:

Every beat of your heart tore the lies all apart
Made foundations quiver
Every wave in the lake caused the porcelain to break
And I shiver...

That song and that album is going to be something that I am going to write about in the future. :)

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oh i cant wait to read it, i love the subject.
thanks for stopping by o'gracious writter

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I’m currently watching a movie of the idea of psychopaths. It’s one that gives me great concerns. They are in their own world just like the illustration of them seeing just themselves in the mirror.

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oh yes, them surrounded by objects

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When dawn comes, hive will shed this portrait.

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fingers crossed

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they are so good at hiding in plain sight... especially when there are so many sociopaths that can mislead their diagnosis...

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yes they even fool judges ...
brain scan is the fastest way to know 100%
wemeet at least one a day thats how much there are everywhere and empaths are magnets.

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I have actually seen people go through this thought process. Working in Mental Health for like 15 years.

It rarely touches them though. The nakedness is way too great an exposure for them to deal with.

This is actually why psych wards have suicide railings all over. The narc, the psychopath, and the sociopath are littered in these halls.

At some point they are confronted with themselves -- sometimes the pain is too immense that the only way out is death.

Most find a way back into the lie.

Very very few, like 0.02% or whatever, find a way out.

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the warriors survivors ⭐️

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Yup!

I was one of them. I was faced with truth -- and accepted it for what it was.

It helped me immensely in my life!

It made me no huge amount of friends mind you, ha, but truth is a much happier way to see life.

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