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RE: The Wave

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Wow a London lass! I was down London before Christmas and was messing around in Chinatown for a spell. Hadn't been down London in a long while. Hopefully i came take a trip for Chinese New Year, hopefully the party will be lit, know what im sayin?

I'm feelin much gooder now, thank you very much. Sometimes a good night sleep, a box load of After Eight Chocolates and a good cuppa does wonders. Drink up if ya got em!

Just wanted to share with you this poem of mine, titled "Triggered By A Long Rain" you may like. Let us know what you think:

Triggered by a long rain;
this semblance still exists
that I cannot keep,
but the process distills me,
known only by those distilled.

Triggered by a wild rain;
at the apex of my restless sleep,
on my finest hour where I’m supposed to be.
At another crossroad...
where am I supposed to be?

Triggered by an urgent rain;
a message in my heartbeat quivers
for a warm rice wine
and my soul’s true keeper.
Here,
those silent nights we shared
the only thing I have.

If you don’t know me by now...
when will you know me?

PS - I am humbled that you reblogged my post! Thank you ever so much! May you be as the Lotus, at peace in muddy waters.

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This poem is quite simply beautiful and moving. It is a process of self-discovery and connection isn't it?

my soul's true keeper

Have you published this on Hive yet? You should.

I am really happy that I shared my poem and got back so much more than I could have imagined from you🙏

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