Through Crystal Tears
The pain that I bear, the wounds unhealed
Are stories for tomorrow, for the lads to learn
The scars are clear, the blisters are fresh
But in every pain, is a glory for tomorrow
Through the crystal tears, are hidden bliss
Through every drop, is a seed it grows
In the dew are hidden tears
In the rain are the drops lost
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Cry if you must, pour out the worries
Do not fight it, let them go with every drop
Through every crystal tears, is a joy awaiting
Do not hold it, cry if you must.
The load is heavy to bear
The shoulders are not wide enough to hold them
But then, after every drop is a smiling sun
A reminder that through crystal tears is a new hope in the horizon
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Your poem is emotionally powerful and beautifully expresses the relationship between pain and hope. The use of imagery like crystal tears, scars,and the smiling sun paints a vivid picture of struggle and healing. There’s a strong sense of resilience throughout the piece.
Thank You for such a wonderful feedback. Indeed you capture the poem's message
Great imagery. Like the title and that the poem brings out hope.
Thank You for your feedback