Awakening


For long I have lie still, doomed in my thoughts
For a while I have lost myself, chasing chaff
Just when I thought highly of myself
I realized I'm doomed, still holding to the past

I have slept too long, blinded by a log in my eyes
For long I have been held a prisoner
For crimes I've brought upon myself
Oh, what I thought I was, I wasn't

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But I will rise above my doom
I wouldn't stay on the floor, I'll mount up wings
I'll fly once again, defeat was never the plan
I'll learn humility, and grow in it

I am awakened, the slumber sleeps no more
I'll take out the log in my eyes
I'll set myself free and fly
Let the past be in the past, I'll embrace the new me.

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Hmmm. I see an encouraging poem.
Thought the character was crushed in spirit which has affected his decisions and progress in life.

However, he was determined to get up and move forward from the set backs. The poem is encouraging, and very positive.
Thanks for sharing.
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Thank You for your positive feedback

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You're welcome

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