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RE: Ask the photographers!
For me it looks a bit to busy, a lot is happening here. But I really like it that the model is in those circles and that there are circles behind here. That's really awesome. But then I am not sure what kind of movements you made with the light but it looks like there is no consistency. About the flash, do you use a portable flash? I would light the model from below, pointing the flash up so that the pavement is not so visible. That is distracting me a little bit. I hope that you can do something with this comment. 👍
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Hi @haastrecht,
First of all thanks for your feedback :)
As I explained on the previous answers, I made no movements with the light : I made my camera rotate on its axis using a rotation tool and I used city lights to draw my background. I don't understand when you say that "there is no consistency" : I worked with
concentric circles to give a feeling of depth and I took a lot of care for my model's placement during the making. Can you tell me more about it?
I'm not used to work with a flashgun so I did wrong with it. I'll try to place it on the floor next time, and to come with a sidekick to make it easier ;)
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