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RE: Ask the photographers!
Hello, I leave my opinion.
Creativity and technique used for the desired purpose = Perfect.
Framing, the line of flight and the circular movement of the model following the effect = Perfect.
Colors? If there were more colors it would help a lot. Given that it's just one, orange-yellow from the flash with external light ruins it (in my opinion).
So, I edited in black and white. It would eliminate the "defect" of light and it would become more attractive, more subjective. It would take longer to understand the image, which would make it more enigmatic.
I took the liberty of doing a simulation that I attach. To imagine yourself you have to experience it.
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Hello @cryptoreforma,
Thanks for your feedback :)
It obvious that I didn't use the flashgun the best way, it lit the floor and I agree it really unaesthetic.
Concerning colors : I usually use complementary colors. For that picture, I would use light-blue. But I had no extra tripod nor extra flashgun to put a colored gel on it and make a light-blue backlight. Next time I'll manage to fix that for sure.
Usually I'm not a big fan of B&W in lightpainting but it gives something different to the picture and I works for sure.
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