RE: The Last Return.
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Thank you very much for this observation @litguru. I never thought of the importance of that to the story but after reading your comment, I realised it is a must-add and so I have tweaked it a bit. I hope the addition makes it tighter. Thank you very much.
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This is a great. Your addition gives more depth to the story by clarifying the tragic circumstances. Cheers!