The Desolation of Duskwood, chapter 1, Arrival at Duskwood Manor - part 8

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Echoes of the Past

The moon hung high in the sky, casting a silver glow over Duskwood Manor, its light seeping through the cracks and crevices of the ancient structure. The Harrow family, each in their own rooms, settled into the quiet of the night, the events of the day echoing in their minds like the remnants of a dream.

In the stillness, Sarah found herself poring over the letter once more, the will they had discovered earlier. The words spoke of legacies and responsibilities, of bonds between the living and the dead. She felt a weight upon her, not oppressive but solemn, a duty to honor the wishes of those who had walked these halls before her.

She placed the letter on the nightstand and extinguished her lamp, the darkness enveloping her. As she drifted towards sleep, she thought she heard the soft creak of floorboards, the gentle rustle of movement. It was as if the manor itself was settling down with her, its sighs and whispers a lullaby of ages.

Michael, surrounded by the books he had eagerly collected, was lost in the history of Duskwood Manor. The texts spoke of grand balls and summer picnics, of quiet winters by the hearth and springs filled with the laughter of children playing in the gardens. He felt a kinship with the authors of these accounts, a shared love for the written word that transcended time.

He eventually succumbed to sleep, a book resting open on his chest, the words blurring as his eyes closed. In his dreams, he wandered the halls of the manor, the pages of his books coming to life around him, the characters stepping out from the bindings to greet him.

Emily, her mind still filled with the melodies she had coaxed from the piano, lay in her bed listening to the sounds of the night. The music had awakened something in her, a creative spark that connected her to the manor's artistic soul. She imagined the music of the past—the waltzes, the concertos, the tender nocturnes—and felt as though she shared the stage with ghosts of musicians long gone.

She eventually drifted off, her dreams a concert hall of memories, the notes she had played earlier now part of the manor's eternal symphony.

John, the ever-vigilant father, had taken a final walk through the house before retiring to his room. He checked the locks, the windows, ensuring the safety of his family. As he walked, he felt the presence of the manor's previous guardians, their silent nods of approval for his care.

In his room, he sat at a small desk, the map of the grounds spread before him. He sketched plans and ideas, his vision for the manor's future taking shape. It was a task that would require time and effort, but he was resolute. The manor deserved to be brought back to life, and he was determined to see it done.

As sleep claimed him, his last thoughts were of the days ahead, the challenges and triumphs that awaited them. He dreamt of the manor restored, its halls filled with light and laughter, a testament to the resilience of history and the strength of family.

The night passed peacefully, the Harrow family each embraced by the manor in their own way. The echoes of the past were not haunting but comforting, a reminder that they were part of a larger story, a tapestry woven with threads of time.

Duskwood Manor, with its new inhabitants, stood silent and watchful under the moonlit sky. It was no longer a relic of the past but a home with a heartbeat, its pulse steady and strong. The Harrows, in their slumber, were the new lifeblood of the manor, and together, they would write the next chapter of its storied legacy.



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Hey @freecompliments—FYI we've muted this author in Scholar & Scribe as the content here is almost certainly AI generated. A checker returns high probability (98%) on all passages on every post I've checked. Thought you'd like to know.

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Greatly appreciate the heads up, Jordy! I'll talk to her and figure out what's going on. Thanks again. 🙏

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Hey @jfuji when i posted the story in Scholar & Scribe i thought it as a place to share it for me and others it was never intended to deceive the community. I am sorry if did not pay attention to any maybe existing rule.

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Hi @leana-ramen, appreciate you recently joining our community to post! By any chance, are you using AI to generate these stories, or to somehow assist you in your writing?

We haven't yet established complete guidelines regarding how AI is being used (except if the content is completely AI-generated, then we allow it to be posted but don't curate nor reward it), so I promise we're not asking in a confrontational manner. 🙏

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Hello @freecompliments the story is generated with the help of ai, but in a elaborated manner (i use fragments i wrote and then complete the story, also the original template i wrote for this story is in a different language and ai helps me to get it into english). I like to work with it and want to share the result here. If this is against any rules then of course i will follow.

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I appreciate the honesty, Leana!

For the time being, we're rewarding and curating these posts, but I'm going to put this up for community discussion, since I had planned to do so before anyway, haha.

In particular, I'd like to ask @josephsavage (who runs the HSBI program) - what do you think of rewarding HSBI for this level of AI usage in writing?

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I don't have a problem with AI usage. I don't believe in tilting at windmills, and it will become increasingly impossible to effectively or accurately detect AI usage.

I should mention that the duly elected 'cop on the beat' thinks they can identify and DV content that is generated using AI tools. I am not aware of community consensus ever being reached on the topic, and I consider it to be an expansion of their scope that is not in the original remit.

I can't stop them from doing it, but I did withdraw my support of their funding proposal because of their expansion of scope without community discussion.

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Greatly appreciate your input, Joseph! Now I'm wondering about another scenario: what if a written article is completely AI-generated, as per admission of the author?

I've seen arguments that because the topic or idea is still thought of by the author, the resultant content is still technically original and theirs to claim ownership. The counterargument would be that they contributed very minimally to the output - and in academic settings, this is not considered valid original work.

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People who make the argument that AI users contributed minimally to the output have never tried to create content using AI that is anywhere near publication ready.

Two scenarios:

  1. minimal input and it's pretty obvious that it's AI generated, and really not that good either.
  2. keep working with it, adjusting prompts, stitching pieces together for flow and maybe having AI redo sections that need more work to be decent quality.

Anybody that is able to pass content as their own without it being obvious that it was AI-generated put a lot more work into it than most of the human-created content on Hive receives.

I've tried to use AI to create content because I don't actually enjoy writing that much. But I have standards, and creating content I would sign my name to is harder with AI than it is to just write it myself.

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Very interesting! I've never tried it myself, so this was quite revelatory to read. Thanks for the insight.

I'm going to put this up for a community vote this month.

@jfuji you may find this interesting.

@leana-ramen possibly the best approach would be for you to include a higher proportion of your original writing, similar to the 2nd scenario that Joseph presented here, and just include the disclaimer that you used AI to enhance your grammar, spelling, word choice, etc. I don't think anybody but the most stringent critics would hold this against you.

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Well it seems it is in general not accepted at all, all my posts are downvoted and my reputation is gone. I would prefer to talk before acting.

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That was more than likely due to Hivewatchers, judging by the votes on your posts. The account is run by a serial abuser on this platform who consistently goes beyond the purview of what the program is supposed to do on the platform. Unfortunately they targeted you this time, and they've previously targeted some new members within my group. I wouldn't remain hopeful that this individual would stop their abusive practices.

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I hope you're not completely discouraged from posting! You're producing content that nobody else has produced before. These are still your ideas, and to some degree, your writing, and there's great value to this.

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Thank you for the nice words. I am still considering if this is the right platform for me

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