Flowers For Ivy | Fiction

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Watching Ivy work the coffee machine through the window glass, courteously attending to her customers with a charming smile, won Justin's heart. She was the prettier one of Mr Cooper's daughters. He liked her and hoped to woo her to become his wife.

Justin stood on the other side of the road, holding yellow roses wrapped in a florist cellophane bag as cars zoomed past. He crossed the road and entered the café. The bell attached to the door jingled his entrance. Ivy glanced up with a ready smile which turned quickly into a frown seeing it was Justin.

He stood awkwardly with the bouquet for a moment debating what to do. Roseline, Ivy's younger sister, waved him over. He walked through the table and chairs to the serving counter. "Hello, Ivy," he said breathlessly. "Hey, Roseline."

"Hi, Justin. Good to see you. What brings you here?" Roseline asked nicely while Ivy went about her work behind the counter, arranging cups and mugs, in preparation for her customers.

"Um, I bought these," he raised the flowers a bit, "for Ivy." Ivy turned then, still not smiling, and snatched the flowers from him. "Thanks but you know I'm busy. Don't want my father to see you, okay?"

Justin nodded and smiled. "Of course. You take care, Ivy." He left the café to walk back to his father's farm.

As soon as he left, Roseline scolded Ivy for her behaviour towards Justin. "You were mean to Justin. You know he likes you."

Ivy curled her lips in a sneer and still, she looked beautiful. "Please. If I return his affection, he may not take me seriously. Better to let him think I don't care."

Roseline stared at Ivy, mouth agape with incredulity before bursting into a laugh. "Wait, what? Where did you hear something so ridiculous?"

Ivy raised a finger like she was teaching her younger sister a life lesson. "Its true. You've never heard that familiarity breeds contempt? Let's see how long he'll hold out."

"That's wrong Ivy. Very." Roseline responded, shook her head and went about her work.

Justin showed up at the café daily to check on Ivy. On some days, Ivy would be nice to him and Justin would believe they were making headway in their friendship. On other days, Ivy would be indifferent to his visits and Justin would be unhappy. But Roseline was always there to keep him company.

He visited with gifts and helped around the café whenever he could. It was always a big relief for the ladies and they had come to lean on him for some heavy lifting.

On a certain day, it was raining and Justin rushed over to the café in the rain. He was wet but did not mind because he was excited to inform the Cooper sisters, especially Ivy, that he'd been promoted at work and would be moving to another state. Unfortunately, it was one of those days Ivy chose to be indifferent to him.

"Justin, we are kind of busy right now. Please come back later, if you want to," Ivy said, irritation written all over her beautiful face. Justin was speechless. Shoulders slumped, he trudged out of the café, leaving a trail of muddy footprints in his wake.

"Ivy!" Roseline reprimanded her and ran after Justin, stepping on the muddy prints, hers imprinted in them. "Wait, Justin. Wait!" Ivy heard Roseline scream outside in the rain.

Ivy merely shrugged and went about her work, smiling inwardly. She thought, now he'll have more reason to come back and see me.

Justin never returned. The next day he travelled out of town to start a new life in another city.

After the following day's work, Roseline noticed her sister looked sad and stared continuously through the window. Ivy on her part noticed her sister was unusually glowy and happy. Roseline never brought up the subject of Justin again.

One sunny day, after two months had passed, the cafe doorbell chimed and both ladies looked up to see Justin walk into the café, with a bouquet of delicate orchids. Ivy's eyes widened at the sight of Justin. Roseline's cry of delight and Justin's bright smile confused her for a moment.

Ivy watched in slow motion as Roseline ran around the counter and jumped into Justin's opened arms. Justin closed his eyes and soaked in the affection from Roseline.

Then it all became clear to Ivy.

Mrs Cooper came out from the backroom, a jug in hand, smiling. "Ah, it's out in the open now. Roseline did not want us to tell you but Justin is here for your sister's hand in marriage."

The couple held each other around the waist and walked towards the counter. "Mrs Cooper, how have you been?" Justin asked and turned to Ivy, "hello Ivy." Ivy smiled stiffly and welcomed Justin.

While at home, Ivy confronted Roseline about the secrecy. "I had to, Ivy. I did not know how you would react. Justin told me he was leaving town that evening and promised to write to me everyday. We became very good friends when he visited the café before his promotion. I do love him."

Ivy apologised and promised to support the couple. Deep in her heart, she mourned what could have been if only she had not been blinded by her beauty and misconception about relationships.

The end.

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A somewhat unexpected ending but perhaps somewhat predictable. The footprints they leave in our hearts always lead us to our best future. Great. Greetings.

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Oh dear! Her misconceptions led her to tears 😢 this is a really sad end for Ivy but looking at the bright side, Justin became her sister's love... Maybe it was meant to be that way.

Footprints... I like where the prompt word appeared, that was the beginning of a new and beautiful love.

Nice story ma'am 😊

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Footprints... I like where the prompt word appeared, that was the beginning of a new and beautiful love.

Spot on! Thanks for reading. !PIZZA

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Oh wow! This is one great twist of a plot! Haha I enjoyed it though because it was satisfying and I am sure Ivy must have learnt her lesson. I am happy for Roseline and Justin, they make a good couple.

Lovely way to use the prompt. Enjoyed reading your story! Well done!

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Hehe, oh yes! Ivy learned her lesson not to toy with people's feelings because I'm sure if reverse was the case, she would have been heart broken. She behaved like a spoilt child here. 😄

I'm happy you liked this story. Thanks for reading and for your comment. !LADY !LUV 🙂

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It's a bit of a betrayal from Roseline. If she really likes the man and is hurt by Ivy's slights to Justin, she should tell her sister and not act at her sister's back.

Good story. Congratulations.

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😄 Roseline did tell Ivy that her behaviour towards the young man was wrong. I guess Ivy was too set in her ways to realise what she was losing.

How are you today, @amaponian? Thanks so much for your visit! !hivebits !LUV 🙂

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I'm ok, thank you.
Hope you are fine, also.
I'm been doing something interesting,
I think I'm gonna write a post about that.
Hope to know more about you.

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Ivy should have just let go of her pride and welcomed Justin if she had any feelings for him. Well, it’s too late for that now.

I gotta say you’re a really good writer. Your work’s always amazing!

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Hehe, I guess Ivy never had any feelings for Justin. If she did, there would have been no need to play games.

I gotta say you’re a really good writer. Your work’s always amazing!

Oh wow, what a lovely and inspiring remark. Thank you so much! !PIZZA !LUV 🙂

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Unfortunately, there is some truth to the idea that men want the one that is ignoring them. And vice versa. This is a very well written and well structured story with clear conflict, rising action and resolution. It's been awhile since I read one of yours; I think you're really getting good.

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Life is full of many ironies, one of which is unrequited love. Good thing Justin recovered quickly, thanks to Roseline.

Thanks a lot for reading and for this glowing comment. !PIZZA 🙂

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Beautifully told story, @kemmyb. You've captured an interesting aspect of human nature, especially in the youth, that we believe we will have second and third chances. But that belief can mean that life passes us by.

Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for engaging with other writers in the community by reading and commenting on their stories!

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You've captured an interesting aspect of human nature, especially in the youth, that we believe we will have second and third chances. But that belief can mean that life passes us by.

You have beautifully summed up my message in this story. Thanks a lot for reading and for your support. 🙂

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Poor Ivy! What a bittersweet story. She is happy for her sister, but certainly had to learn a painful lesson along the way by playing mental games with Justin. Well done.

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Thank you! 😊 I agree, Ivy certainly learned a painful lesson and Roseline behaved maturely. !LUV

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A beautiful story about misconceptions about love. Unfortunately for Ivy she lost a man that loved him truly cos of a misconception.

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Thanks for reading! 🙂

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What a great story, I really liked the ending you gave it. A painful but necessary learning for Ivy.
Regards @kemmyb

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A painful but necessary learning for Ivy.

Oh, I agree! She learned her lesson and hopefully she'll be nicer to people. Hehe. Thanks a lot, @popurri for your visit and comment. 🙂

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Deep in her heart, she mourned what could have been if only she had not been blinded by her beauty and misconception about relationships

Indeed most times ladies lose track easily while chasing shadows. A good story with moral lessons.

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