RE: The Last Return.

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I love the plot of the story. The events during the time frame between her arrival at the airport and her entry into the village was quite interesting. I thought something bad was going to happen to her along the way, before getting into the village but hopefully, it didn't.

No one ever had to go through what Mia did. After spending so much years away from the one thing that means the world to you, you come come back only to meet nothing but void and sadness.

Nice story



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It was really a heart wrenching moment for Mia. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for stopping by

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