RE: The Pursuit Of A Better Tommorow

Your story has a recognisable arc but your piece would benefit from some focused time editing your submission before publishing it in the community. Have you tried writing in Google docs and using the built in editor which catches spelling errors, and issues with punctuation and basic grammar? In addition, I recommend you take a look at the plethora of articles in The Ink Well Catalog of Fiction Writing tips that can help you to hone your craft. Look at the Show, Don't Tell article and Developing Memorable Characters. As a reader we need to fall in love with the characters in a story. We want to root for them and see them undergo a character transformation which either helps them to overcome and work through a conflict, or is a result of the conflict they have endured. Kindly address the issue with your image so that we may finish curating this piece. Thank you for writing in The Ink Well.