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Wow thank you so much for this deep review! You really caught all the little details I planted — my mother's warning "you don open mouth wey no suppose open" and Baba Tunde laughing it off, and that scary question "Who will give me story to speak?". I love that you noticed it is a story about storytelling itself and the palm oil detail with my grandmother's voice. Thank you for reading so closely, it means a lot to me!