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RE: MY NIGHTMARE JOB IN LAGOS __#54

"To the writer of this deeply moving story, I am literally spellbound by your narrative style, which is, to say the very least, powerful, compelling, and meticulously crafted.
The beginning took my breath away when you said, 'When I got a job in Lagos, my mother killed chicken. My father prayed for me... with AC.' You conveyed the innocent dreams of those who have nothing in a way that truly breaks the heart.
Then, moving to the main body of the story, the details you included instantly immersed me in the grim reality of capitalist exploitation, to the point where I hated your boss as if he were real. The conclusion brought a sense of relief, making me feel that at least a shred of justice was served.
I honestly cannot stop marvelling at your work; I am still processing and digesting the story with both my mind and my heart."

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😳 wow...
thanks for your compliments it means a lot to be.

Thanks for reading, thanks for you time✨

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