RE: Supersticiones (Superstitions) [ES/EN]

In the end, Alise ended up becoming superstitious; her friend’s strong belief had turned her that way. The truth is that negativity breeds negativity, and Martina is very negative. One event after another only served to reinforce that belief even further, and just to be on the safe side, Alise performed the salt ritual.

The mind works in strange ways; if you believe something will work, it keeps you safe. Your story, with its dialogue, is perfect, it makes the reader think there really is some truth to it. It’s entertaining, simple, easy to follow and leaves you thinking. Thank you so much for always being part of the community. A big hug!🤗

A fin de cuentas Alise terminó siento supersticiosa, la creencia fuerte de la amiga la ha convertido. Lo cierto es que lo negativo llama a lo negativo y Martina es muy negativa. Un suceso tras otro que lo único que hicieron era reforzar más la creencia y por las dudas Alise hizo el rito de la sal.

La mente funciona de maneras extrañas, si cree que eso funcionara pues mantiene a la persona a salvo. Tu relato con diálogos es perfecto, llevando al lector a pensar que realmente hay algo de cierto, es entretenido, simple, entendible y te deja pensando. Muchas gracias por siempre estar presente en la comunidad. Un gran abrazo!🤗

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