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RE: Midnight Letters Prompt #16: Let's write a LOVE POEM for the Night
Hello!
The message in your poem is simple yet powerful. It's something we should all keep in mind, despite the sadness and contrasts that life can bring.
Here is my entry:
https://ecency.com/hive-186424/@roswelborges/time-ashes-poetry-en-es
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Hi, I found a lot to unpack in your poem. Certainly themes of labor, family, resilience, and intimacy. The imagery of coal and transformation was powerful. The use of faces and hands evoking generational cycles—resignation, longing, promises made and broken. Your poem depicts desire as a delicate force, intertwined with hardship. The sombre tone of the first part sets up the tension of the passionate second part nicely.
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I can only express my deepest gratitude for you taking the time to analyze my lyrics.
Bright hugs!