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You describe the development of your friendship with Jessica so that we all can understand how this came to pass. You also fill us in on your background, so we realize how important this relationship is to you. Good job there.
One suggestion: You use the expression, "one faithful day." Actually, the correct expression is "one fateful day." We offer this correction so that in your future writing, here and elsewhere, you might avoid making this mistake.
Thank you for sharing this experience with us. Keep writing!
Thank you so much. I will keep note of these suggestions and corrections. Thank you for the compliment.