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RE: Memories.

Running. The rhythmic thud of her feet on the soil of the earth before the world dissolved into a blur. Her heart hammered against her ribs. Her body ached. Her lungs burned. Her feet screamed. But her soul. It was on fire!

I like the rhythm of this story because it brings out the emotion of the memories that haunt Chanel. Mourning can take a long time but as Chanel shows, people are resilient, specially when they remember and honour their past.

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Thank you. Yes.

She sure remember and honor her past. Thank you for reading.

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