A Special First Date [Fiction]


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"What should I do?" Dennis Oswald muttered to himself as he fastened a leash around his dog's neck. Just then a frail-looking woman wearing a woollen shawl around her delicate shoulders gingerly stepped out of their condo.

She smiled at her husband. Her skin was papery and pale. Her eyes were gentle, and her mouth set in a thin, soft line. Dennis smiled back, held out his hand and gently grabbed hers as he helped her down the small steps in front of their condo.

Angelique tilted her face towards the sky and closed her eyes basking in the warmth of the sun. Her husband, Dennis, cajoled her to go on a walk with him. It'd been ages since she left the house.

Dennis gazed at her, pain etched in his features at the sweetness and calm she exuded. Every moment spent with her was precious and ingrained in his memory for the times when he would feel her absence. He would reach into his memory and pull up this moment.

The elderly couple held hands like young lovers and walked slowly past a large garden close to the park. The cold morning was warmed by the sun's rays and ideal for exercising. Dennis held the leash tight so their dog wouldn't collide with people jogging past them.

His thoughts roamed around what his wife's healthcare provider had advised. "Mr Oswald, you are struggling to care for your wife on your own and it is affecting your health," said the doctor. "We can provide symptom management and improve her quality of life. Just say the word and I will arrange transportation for her."

Dennis asked for some time to consider his options. Angelique's memory was fading faster than they could manage. He loathed those days when she would wake up and panic, wondering who he was and where she was.

It was a difficult decision to live apart from his wife of forty-eight years. They had no children. His wife's only relative was her sister, Marilyn who was married with four children.

Dennis sighed as he remembered his argument with Marilyn. The discussion quickly escalated due to Marilyn's insistence that Angelique should be cared for by her family and not some hospice care.

The dog's bark drew his attention. They were close to the park. He threw a small green ball and unclipped the leash from the dog's neck to allow it to chase after the ball. He raised his head and caught sight of fresh zucchinis in a fenced garden. The owner bent over her vegetables, weeding and tending them.

Memories of the first time he met his wife, Angelique, flooded his consciousness. "Do you remember the day we first met?" Angelique asked, smiling at him. It was like she could read his thoughts.

They both sat down on one of the park's benches. "Of course, I do," Dennis replied. "It was at the old community garden on the outskirts of town. You were picking fresh tomatoes with your father and I offered to help with the watering."

Angelique chuckled. "Very bold of you. But you were so nervous that you spilled water all over me."

Dennis chuckled too. "Only because I knew your father left us to help with harvesting other vegetables. I was so captivated by your beauty that I couldn't help myself."

Angelique's smile faded suddenly as she laid her head on his shoulder. Dennis held his breath for a moment, silently praying she was still herself. He wouldn't want her to panic and make a scene if she temporarily forgot where she was.

"You know what?" He asked as an idea popped into his head.

"What?"

"Let's go home. I want to cook something special for you."

"Yea?" She beamed a wide smile.

As his wife took her medication and rested, Dennis cooked the same delicious meal he made for Angelique on their first date after the harvest at the local community garden. While the lasagna cooked in the oven, he made a call to their health provider at Tidewell Hospice.

"Mr Oswald, it's good to hear back from you," the doctor said.

"I've made up my mind. Please send a car for both my wife and me. We'll reside together at your facility. I can't bear the thought of being apart from her," Dennis' voice broke at that moment.

"I understand, Mr Oswald," the doctor replied solemnly. "You won't be the first man to live at our centre with his wife. I'll make the arrangements immediately."

Dennis nodded. "Thank you."

That evening, Dennis recreated their first date. Angelique's mind was sharp and she was all smiles. The dinner turned out to be a memorable one as they celebrated their love.

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I hope you enjoyed reading this short story. It is my response to The Ink Well Prompt #103 inspired by the prompt "A Special Time".

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What a romantic story and I love the way you place the dialogues. From what I remembered, your writings have certainly improved.

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Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm happy you love this story. I appreciate your visit and your feedback. πŸ₯°
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You build this tale in wonderful layers, bringing us into the history between this couple with just the right details at the right time! Dennis is a compelling character who hooks the reader into his dilemma, touching our hearts as he recalls the special moment he and his wife shared when they met. The ending here is as satisfying as a slice of lasagna! Thank you for sharing this fantastic story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community!

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Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm delighted Dennis was able to captivate you as he did me when I was writing it. Hehe. Your kind words and support mean a lot. Thanks again!

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Dennis is such a vibrant character; he feels like the old man who lives across the street or something to me by the end. I am grateful as I watch how tenderly he loves his wife, still finding time to entertain the dog too. How he forges on, even though Angelique's sister is harsh, and the choice are rough. When I got to the end, I was swept away in how happy I was that these two found each other, and then I remembered it was a story πŸ€£πŸ™Œ Amazingly done!!!

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...and then I remembered it was a story πŸ€£πŸ™Œ

πŸ˜… I know what you mean! Sometimes, we wish it's real and not just a story. I'm happy this story resonates with you. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts!
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You have written the special love story of Dennis and Angelique so well, I can feel his sadness.
It's really tough to deal with memory loss, but love supersedes.

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Well said! Love always wins. Memory loss is an unpleasant experience. It's like the person ceases to exist at that point. Thanks very much for reading. I'm happy you felt a connection to the characters. πŸ₯°
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You're a good writer, how could I not?

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Beautiful story, so romantic.
Even after such a long journey their love hasn't faded away, recreating the memories of their first date is so adorable.
I read it twice and loved it.

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I read it twice and loved it.

πŸ˜… I'm thrilled you loved it. Imagine an elderly couple still loving each other this much after many years together. It's a rarity.

I appreciate your visit and feedback! πŸ₯°
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Imagine an elderly couple still loving each other this much after many years together. It's a rarity.

I wanna experience it myself. May our love be everlasting like this one.

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A beautiful love story.
Despite everything that happens, they always want to be together. There are no loves like this anymore or they are very few.
The story is very smooth and enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

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There are no loves like this anymore or they are very few.

You are right! Relationships like this are very few. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my story. I appreciate your lovely comment. !PIZZA πŸ™‚

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I look forward to your articles my friend, the ending was quite touching.
Your words are exquisite and your writings capture ones imagination well

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Your comments are always lovely! Thank you. πŸ™‚

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You transcend your readers into a world where they not only read but see what is being portrayed. Thank you for this beautiful piece.

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Your appreciation of my story means a lot! Thank you for taking the time to read and for your lovely comment. πŸ™‚

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such a lovely tale. I fervently hope that when we are old people allow my wife to remain with me too, like this health carers allowed Dennis. If there is one thing which troubles me it is how medical science has increased our length of life but are unable to help with the quality of that long life. This story hit hard friend. Well written. Thank you.

Cheers from a fellow #dreemerforlife

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it is how medical science has increased our length of life but are unable to help with the quality of that long life

You are absolutely right! I think we have the responsibility of maintaining the quality of life that we want. Thanks so much for reading and the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. !PIZZA

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A great story as always @kemmyb πŸ‘Œβ€οΈ

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Thank you! πŸ™‚
Where have you been hiding? 😏

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Exams took me awayπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ’”

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QuΓ© romantico, un amor creativo, Β‘Hermosa historia!

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Muchas gracias por sus amables palabras. πŸ₯°

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@kemmyb Hello, now commenting on the story of a consistent award-winning author would be like showing a candle to the sun. However, I still felt that you have presented a wonderful description of the extremes of love of a middle-aged couple. It was as if both the characters came alive before my eyes.

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πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ applauding your words and show. Its indeed a fiction per-excellence @kemmyb.

I loved it. But one thing that could easily way down a man and probably face pressure from family and perhaps friends is childlessness

But in the case of Dennis and Angelique. They seemed not to outwardly make it an obvious borden yet they knew what they feel within especially retiring to themselves alone.

However, the most important thing I got from your fictional exposition is #LOVE which is the greatest builder of anythingπŸ’ͺ

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