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RE: Longing

I love this story, @zerah. I want to be in that kitchen :) I will suggest one small proofreading error I'm certain you will be eager to correct. It doesn't belong in such a lovely story:

it's always a match made in heaven every time,e,"

The extra 'e' and comma

Great writing.

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Thank you. I have edited it.

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