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When I start to frame my comment, one word comes to mind: grace. You describe a woman who lived her life with grace, and you describe it with eloquence. The stages work well here. Sometimes they can be a bit artificial, but not here. They are perfect.
This story moved me, very much. I read a lot of stories, and that is a rare thing for me to say. Excellent writing, @terjix
Thank you so much for your comment and criticism. It means a lot.✨