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RE: LIFE OF MY PARTY
Hello @hazmat,
I was impressed with your writing skill as I read this. The voice of the narrator is persuasive and moving. Although the complication (Emily's death) is not a unique plot line, your treatment is distinctive. The subtlety of your approach, your balance between positive and negative, is expertly crafted.
I've personally gifted you 2 HSBI tokens in acknowledgement of my appreciation for this story's quality.
Well done.
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Thank you for your words @agmoore , I appreciate how you've taken your time to carefully explain both the strengths and weakness in my story. I agree that the character simply dying was not a unique plot line (it's almost like anyone could've anticipated it), your comment will go a long way towards improvement.
Also thanks for the gift of HSBI tokens, I really appreciate them.