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RE: Proof//Prueba. [Eng//Esp].
I found your poem to be well structured. It starts off very strong with the finger bite. It moves the reader then from infatuation to realisation. I especially liked the line 'I was in love, blinded and filled with lust,' which I think will resonate with anyone who's been there.
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Thank you for the poem analysis. I am glad you enjoyed reading.
Yes, the love part is very relatable. Thanks for reading.