Stuart Turnbull

RE: LA Modern Noir: Chapter 8b Wilson

So very kind! Thank you, that kind of praise is very helpful in keeping the draft moving forward! I can add you to the reader list for this if you'd…

it's between chapter stuff, but the breadcrumbs are in the last Wilson chapter. though, tbf, the rough first draft thing is getting truer by the chapter. I'm just trying to push…

I hadn't seen this come out. Will defo look for it. Looks my kind of film nonsense. Techno-babble espionage with car chases and…

I did think about writing that, but in the scheme of the story the party didn't feel it was going to be essential to the overall tale - but we'll see when it's time to…

that is particularly egregious Allison passed the glass of wine to Shonda and said, ‘Sit down, drink your wine, and leave my hair alone.’ that reads…

Thank you. Writing characters who arent the same is def a thing I'm working…

Anytime there's brackets it's a place to fill in a detail. Happens most when I dont want to break a flow and get distracted by research. If you see any such, feel free to make…

Thanks. You are getting the very 1st draft's so sorry about typos. Will look at chapter title clues as to who is in a chapter in redraft (assuming anything…

Thanks for reading. And yes, Earl is broad brush bad. Is he overly a caricature? And did I get the balance of revealing horrible action without it being gratuitous or…