Waiting (#zapfic Monday)
Words form, will not release.
No voice to call my own.
Darkness prevails.
No eyes to see the world.
Feel everything, control nothing.
1362 days 15 hours 42 minutes.
A silent tear escapes.
The machine still beeps.
I hang in the balance.
I'm waiting.
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Is it about someone who is in the state of coma? Waiting for one's eyes to open
i think so
I also do 😊
Yes it is 🙏
😪😥
Nice
Oh dear. This is touching. It's like being stuck in a place, waiting for the body to respond so the patient can wake up.
Nicely done. 👍
Thanks Kemmy, trying my hand at some microfiction each week now alongside the short stories and blogs. Thank you for appreciating it. !PIZZA
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Sometimes that's all have
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Hi! I like your story. I feel the anguish of waiting on limbo in it.
thank you :-) !PIZZA