Hi, I found a lot to unpack in your poem. Certainly themes of labor, family, resilience, and intimacy. The imagery of coal and transformation was powerful. The use of faces and…
I liked how your poem moved from loneliness to love. Very relatable. The lines "midnight cuddles" and "living in my humble manger" I felt added warmth and intimacy to your work.…
I found your poem captured beautifully the profound, often unspoken essence of love. Your lines “Love did not save me. It revealed me” are particularly striking, emphasising…
I really feel the raw pain and confusion of mourning in your poem, especially in the lines "Pressing round his head like a ring from hell" and "Salty water stung his eyes". Your…
