your poem is a moving exploration of existential themes. We are doomed drew me in and I liked the line the only way to victory is death. As for being sheeple! A minor feedback…
I feel the impassioned tone of the poem very fitting for the evocative subject matter although, can I ask, what do you think s the central theme because it's not entirely clear…
I found your poem to have a strong theme of love an connection emphasised by the use of 'tapestry of soul' acting as a unifying motif, highlighting the shared essence of the…
I liked the structure of the poem and the arrangement of words especially in stanza 3 - On heartbreak, Self-depreciation, Disrespected,
You're left feeling like they wish the…
I liked the way you've woven together the themes of memory, hope, and the cyclical nature of life. The imagery is rich and evocative, and the language is beautiful and…
