ZapFic Monday - Powder in 240 characters

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Here's my entry for ZapFicMonday! Hope you will like it!

The alarm rang when the lady walked out of the mart. She immediately ran ahead but the security guards eventually caught her. They opened her bag and found two tins of baby milk powder. With tears in her eyes, she begged them to let her go.

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Nice story.
!PIZZA
!LUV
!LOLZ

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Oh, this is lovely. It turned to a lengthy story, she probably stole because she had no money and wanted to feed her child.

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I felt her pain, she probably stole because she's a pauper and can't find a means to feed her child. Nice write up!

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I feel so sorry for the lady, but she shouldn't have done what she did.
Nice story dear.

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They opened her bag and found two tins of baby milk powder. With tears in her eyes, she begged them to let her go.

I'll let her go if that store is mine. But, because stealing is illegal, I'll make her work for it as well.

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You are right too! Thanks for the comment!

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