Great poetry. It has a lot spark and energy.
story of fire in us, too bright to be told
We are sons of the light buried in dust
No shadows can hold us, no curtain can…
It's a very nostalgic poem on the passage of time and memories. It evokes great imagery.
Now, dust sunbeams traces where pictures hung
And silence settles where voices were once…
Cities can be a maze sometimes, and there's nothing worse than getting stuck or lost in traffic during a hot day. I like how you set up the environment that becomes the central…
