Marks and Punctures [Fiction]


"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage." ~ Lao Tzu

"Get away from me!" Vicky yelled, her neck veins visibly pulsing. Her eyes were red and watery as if she had been crying but she wasn't.

Thomas, aka, Tipper stared at her, anguish etched on his face. "I can't. You are ruining your life, Vicky and I'll never let you," he replied in frustration. He saw the way her hands twitched and shook as she attempted to lift a glass of water. She gave up and glared at him for watching. The syringe marks and punctures on her hand were a dead giveaway as to her condition.

Vicky brushed past him into her room. "Vicky, wait …" he said as he followed her. She shut the door in his face. He banged it angrily with a fist.

"Leave me alone," she groaned and he knew she'd started to cry.

Tipper dropped his head on the closed door and squeezed his eyes shut. How else could he convince Vicky that he loved her and would never let anything happen to her? The past did not have to determine her present or future. He'd been in a similar position before and with the help of his family, he stopped using and had been sober for seven years.

Vicky had no one except for him. If only she would have faith in their love for each other and trust him to help her.

"I can't leave you alone, Vicky. You need help…"

"Shut up, Tipper. It's you who needs help. In fact, why don't you see a therapist or something 'cause you are needy and always in my business all the time. I'm tired. Stay away from me!"

"Vicky please."

"I mean it, Tipper. Get out of my house."

Tipper waited for a long moment, believing she didn't mean it until he heard the heartrending sobs like she was torn apart from the inside out. It was when teardrops touched his lips that he realised he'd been crying as well.

He turned and left her apartment. Any attempt to try and get through to her now might worsen the situation.

Two days later….

Tipper's mobile phone buzzed in his pocket. He glanced around the office to ensure his boss was not watching. He bent a little using his pc as a cover and swiped the screen to answer the call.

"She won't stop screaming your name," a menacing voice growled, causing Tipper's heart to race. He knew exactly who the voice was referring to. "Now she threw up on my fine Persian rug and passed out…"

"W-who is this?" Tipper stuttered.

The voice chuckled as if he was amused. "C'mon Tipper. Long time no see, but that doesn't mean I've forgotten about you. It's been what, six years? Seven?"

Tipper paled and gripped his mobile phone tightly. "Don't hurt her. Please…"

"Boom! I knew she meant something to you since she keeps calling out your name. Shame on you, Tipperrrr. You know better than to date 'em."

"Look. Enough with this chitchat!" Tipper retorted with a hint of aggression. Sobriety hadn't robbed him of his fighting spirit. "Where is she and how much does she owe you? It's always about the money for you."

The voice cackled. "You're damn right about that. She owes me eight grand. But now it's ten since you are involved."

"I'll come for her now," Tipper said firmly, ending the call.

His hands shook as he stared at the phone. He called his friend at the bank, got the money and drove all the way downtown to rescue Vicky.

Hours later….

Vicky's vision blurred for a moment before it cleared and she saw Tipper seated beside her in a room that looked like a hospital. He appeared lost in thought.

"Hey you," she whispered. A broad smile spread across Tipper's face, reaching his eyes. Vicky smiled back for a moment and started to cry. "I'm so sorry, Tipper. I don't know what came over me. I owe Angus some money…."

"Shhh, it's taken care of," Tipper replied gently.

Vicky's eyes widened in surprise. "I owe him eight grand…"

"Vicky," Tipper sighed deeply. "I said it's taken care of."

All Vicky could do was look at Tipper in amazement and wonder what she'd done to deserve such a loyal friend. She was ready to make rehab work, if only for Tipper's sake.

Tipper froze in his seat, unknown to Vicky. He rushed to the window and saw a dark figure in a hoodie retreating into the shadows. Just then a volunteer dressed like a nurse came into the room. "I'm afraid but visiting hours are over," she said.

"No. I'm staying if you don't mind. I'll speak with your supervisor," Tipper said firmly.

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This is beautiful.
Thank you for this.
A loyal friend indeed.

We must take caution when trying to effect a change in another. Sometimes, we need to give them space even if we'll stand at a distance

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Sometimes, we need to give them space even if we'll stand at a distance

You are correct! In situations like this, it's best not to force a change or response from the other person unless they are in immediate danger.

I appreciate your thoughtful comment. 😊 !PIZZA

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-Sweet and amazing story of love and loyalty! It's nice to know that even if our world is full of challenges and not-so-good people around, yet still there are a few that are good and caring people! And in the story, He is a hero and a savior! Thank you for this story it's inspiring a person like that is precious! Have a blessed day🙏 Ma'am @kemmyb

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...yet still there are a few that are good and caring people!

Well said! You have captured the main gist in the story. Thanks a lot for stopping by and for your kind comment. 🥰
!LUV

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-And it's true! Almighty God created us only means that goodness always wins in the end no matter how much evil minded people reign. Thanks a lot Ma'am @kemmyb. Have a blessed day!🙏-

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That was a good story, @kemmyb. I like the strong introduction and how the story goes until the end.
I was hooked to read and I liked what message you want to say for your reader.
Well-written as well. !PIZZA

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Oh wow....
Such a moving and heated read.
Are Angus's bóys back to claim more funds?

Have you listened to this??

Sounds like the ending soundtrack to your story right 😗🔥😀

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What an amazing trio! This song is so cool, @seki1. 😅 This is the first time I'm hearing it. I listened over and over again. The lyrics are meaningful and touching and capture the plot of this story. So on point!

Thanks a lot for sharing this. It's added to my playlist. 😊 !LUV

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I knew you would like it😂😂

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Hello,

Your story is captivating, I appreciate your artistic use of words here. I liked how you portrayed the raw emotions and struggles of addiction, love, and loyalty which is hard and difficult to come by these days. I felt this story like I was experiencing it first hand. It is a pleasure to read from you! 😊

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Its a pleasure to read your comment! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. 🙂
!PIZZA

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And the story ended when it was getting more interesting 😉
I hope that guy at the window isn't up to something shady.

Beautifully crafted, I enjoyed reading it.

#dreemerforlife #freecompliments

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Hehe. Maybe I'll work on a second part to the story! Thanks so much for reading. !LADY

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That was a good story that expresses the heart of some good people. Vicky surely had that friend who was ready to be good and loyal to her. Tipper really tried for her and never gave up too.

I popped in here through #dreemport

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Yes, Tipper stood by Vicky and saved her from a notorious drug peddler. Friends like that are rare and priceless. Thanks so much for your visit. !PIZZA 🙂

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Good piece of writing, Kemmy. I like the grit in this one. Drugs... one of the things I despise most in this world... next to the people that peddle them! Left us hanging at the end... who on earth is the shadowy figure and what would he want with either of them? I sense a 'to be continued'...

I dropped in from Dreemport this evening.

#dreemerforlife

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Thanks so much, Sam. Yes, I'm thinking of working on a continuing part soon. 😊
!LADY

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Recently I was trying to help a friend who was an addict. But, I found myself involved and become addict myself. Many people fail to recognize their own mistakes or acknowledge them but struggle to break the habit. At times, they escape from their problems, seeking solace in addiction. Overcoming addiction is truly challenging, but with a strong will or supportive friends who believe in them, nothing is impossible.

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Overcoming addiction is truly challenging, but with a strong will or supportive friends who believe in them, nothing is impossible.

I couldn't agree more. It's a slippery slope and steady support always makes a big difference. Thanks so much for reading and sharing your experience. Thanks also for the points. !PIZZA 🙂

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