A nicely structured story, @amiegeoffrey. Just one thing to watch out for when writing your stories: you switched back and forth from first person to 3rd person and it was a little confusing. Stick to one or the other ;-)
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A nicely structured story, @amiegeoffrey. Just one thing to watch out for when writing your stories: you switched back and forth from first person to 3rd person and it was a little confusing. Stick to one or the other ;-)
Oh.. Noted.