RE: The Apostate Must Rise (POB WOTW S5W6)

hehe I have looked at it a lot over the past year and when I do drop points I always look to see where I can improve. Not to compete with others, but to improve my own writing and engagement. Like you...I write the story or discursive essay that I want to write; I rely on the natural flow ❤️ But the grading system has certainly helped me to improve through little tweaks here and there. Always worth a look. !PIZZA