RE: LA Modern Noir: Chapter 7a - Allison

I love how you capture Allison’s mix of excitement and concern here—it really gives a glimpse into her layered emotions about Earl and Shonda. The subtle tension with Earl’s mysterious packages and his somewhat cold call contrasts so well with the warmth of her conversation with Shonda. I can feel Allison’s relief about Shonda’s visit, but also her lingering unease about Earl’s new job. This chapter sets up a fascinating mix of anticipation and mystery. Can’t wait to see how it unfolds!