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RE: The Edge of Reality ~ Part 2
um... @samsmith1971 might be a tad more correct 😱😭 !LOLZ
This is an awesome part 2 @penderis. I read this as being a perspective beyond the veil in the world of mortality... a father has lost his wife and is losing his daughter. When she passes he fights to bring her back and just when he thinks that he may have found a way... and that he may have found HER... he doesn't, instead he sees the immortal girl through the veil stepping back and away from the jump... and he reaches out to her... part 3 pretty please @grocko. You guys could keep this up for a few more chapters at least! We definitely need to know what happens NEXT!!! !PIZZA !ALIVE !LUV
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Your perception of events is spot on! 👏
As for future chapters, like I told Lilster, these two parts feel like they’re the prologue to some novel. 😅
hahaha... well keep them chapters coming you two!!! This is fabulous! @grocko @penderis !LUV !ALIVE !PIZZA
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Nice synopsis, I think we can use it for the dustjacket !PIZZA !LUV
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hahaha... my work is done, yours has truly begun !LOLZ !LUV
I thought you guys wrote so well together. Your writing really is very complementary.
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