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RE: "Because it's there..." - Part 1 (Dreem-WoTW S2 R3)
Omg great writing. You certainly love the cold landscape as a setting and it truly has a dangerous charm. So beautifully paced and descriptive. The only thing that jarred was a litany of prayer - sounds like she may have had time for a half prayer at best! I keep missing the second parts of these stories so hope I get to read @snooks.
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aw thank you, River... and yes, you are right! I have just edited it to read "A half-prayer barely escaped her lips" - lol... thank you... I always appreciate constructive critique like this 💗 Not sure what the hell I was thinking other than I stubbornly liked the word litany !LOLZ and I must have missed the first time around that a litany is a prayer with several petitions 😆 You can catch @snook 's part 2 here !LUV !ALIVE !LADY
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'litany of prayer' are words that just naturally go together, so if you don't pay attention they might slip in! I like constructive feedback too, just I don't get it often - people are too scared to here as it's all about the positive vibes and upvotes, but I knew you'd appreciate it as soon as I said it!!! Oh yay - she's already written it, off to read, THANKYOUUUUUUUUU
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