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Oh yes, long... I will use your feedback... You are absolutely right with the length... And I am interested that I offer a nice to consume way. Maybe a long text cen be compensated with quality, but it stays a long text where other jump away from it in the middle - and then I don't reach my coal to say what I would like to say. A good cliffhanger would be much better! And When I think about: (sure we always have to ensure our articles are good to engage the reader for a later visit again, but) when we think about that in a smaller scale: "What is the reason the reader is hyped from part 1 and why he like to come back to part 2?" This thoughts only can improve actions (when we want to tak it like this... Others would just think "Okay, I split my content and earn twice/double on the same thing behind). No, really, when we think a little about, we could create a lot of positive things out of splitting a long article into two or three parts.
Very good feedback and reflections you triggered, Josiva; thank you for that! And that you used your time to write me! Metaphoric and a little more than what I like to say, but: It is one thing to throw a coin into the cup of a homeless guy; but another thig to sit down on the ground with him for 4 minutes and spend the time, sharing the same level (because of this, sitting down to him, instead of standing and looking down) and integrate him on a very normal level.
Damn... And now I wrote a long comment too... I am ill... (Really! Next posting is about that I am ill...)
Josivaldo, thanks again & HIve a great day! See you later!
Your text is long, but I like the way you conduct the dialogue; you manage to present a variety of situations within the same perspective. Your context about the beggar reflects the feeling of empathy for others, something that should exist in all perspectives of life. Criticizing is easy; experiencing other people's lives is a mystery.
I've just finished my second three-shift journey; tomorrow I'll be back home. I wish you a great night, my friend.
Trying to work up the courage to post, but I'll probably rest. I'll post tomorrow; better to preserve my mental health.
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