ZapFic Friday - Ribbon in 50 words
Here's my entry for ZapFic50 Friday!
Mary was reading a book at the cafe while her kids were running around in the mall. Just then, her daughter spotted a suspicious package and shouted for her. Before Mary could react, her daughter stepped forward to pull the ribbon. Mary closed her eyes and prepared for the worst.
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Nice lines, I believe they could have been more to that interesting story if there was more than 50 words
Hehe I think so too! Thanks for dropping by!
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