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RE: Not Very Colorful [Fiction]
Okay, I want more!.
What happens next? Was the redhead question or killed? Interesting story. I hope Rick is more careful from now on. Its a small world.
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Well said! Rick is the son of a wealthy man and it seems many people are after him. He slips into a place where no one would think to look, hoping to enjoy himself only to realise he's not invisible after all. Thanks to his father, he always has a shadow watching his back. Certainly, the narrator will question the server but whether she'll be alive afterwards is another matter! I might write a continuing chapter.
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