A Bitter Pill 💊 (Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2830)

Hello #freewriters, happy weekend. Trust our weekend is going well. Welcome to my blog. I present to us my 5 minutes poetry. I look forward to reading your feedback in the comment section.

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Ah Ugochi
I told her you know
I told her about the assessment
The forthcoming assessment

That she should be careful and vigilant
Be vigilant about the evaluation
For the outcome might be shocking
So shocking for the fainthearted

But she chose to ignore me
And walk the dangerous path
The path of ignorance and cowardice
The path of negativity and charlatan

For such an assessment
Meant for the brave and witty
The prepared and the savvy
The wise and noble

She has gone to misrepresent
To misrepresent her clan
A clan of royals and reserved
A clan of tutelage

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You can see they failed her
A bitter pill indeed
A bitter pill for her charlatan
A bitter pill for her negativity

Because she failed to listen
She failed to sit up
Ugochi failed to be vigilant
And got served the bitter pill

Unexpectedly she shrugged
Rising from her disbelief
Looking weird she exclaimed
What a lesson I have learnt

I will go home to my mother
And tell her my story
That I have failed the clan
And accepted the verdict

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Loved your poem! Thanks for your Freewrite!

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Ugochi chose her path. She was warned, but she didn't listen, and she got served the bitter pill.

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Exactly , most times in our paths, we are given suggestions, good advice such that if we listen and apply caution ⚠️ we will be victorious.

But you know, because of arrogance and I too know, we tend to ignore the voice of wisdom and follow our mind ,not taking time to think it through.

The next thing is failure and regrets everywhere.

We just need to be fully guided

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You are correct 👍

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