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RE: The Bicycle Of Doom [Fiction]
Oh no!!! I was hoping for a better fortune for Hakeem.
Your writing is so fluent and expressive, @kemmyb. Not only a talented hand, but a practiced hand :)
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Oh no!!! I was hoping for a better fortune for Hakeem.
Your writing is so fluent and expressive, @kemmyb. Not only a talented hand, but a practiced hand :)
Thanks so much for your heartwarming compliment on this short piece. I wanted a better fortune for Hakeem too! But his pride and, especially disbelief worked against him. I feel he didn't value the gift handed down to him. Sometimes the old works better than the new. Thanks again for reading. I appreciate your visit and support. 🌹