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RE: Badly Made Gown [Fiction]
I liked the story, @kemmyb. Great, clever response to the prompt. One thing, though, that gave me pause. The mother asked if she should take her daughter back.
Given how much that mother loved her daughter, I don't think she'd hesitate. I have children and would never hesitate, no matter the circumstances. The door has always been open :)
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Thanks so much! Sara's love for her daughter was never in question. I included the husband's question to show that the world around us can sometimes doubt what a mother already knows with certainty. In her heart, the door was never closed.
Thanks so much for your visit, support and compliment on this short story. I appreciate you. 🌹