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RE: LA Modern Noir: Chapter 7b - Allison

The dynamic between Allison and Shonda is so beautifully captured here—it feels genuine and nostalgic, like the kind of friendship that picks up effortlessly no matter how much time has passed. I loved the contrast between Allison’s sense of calm with Shonda and the subtle tension when Earl is around. Your descriptions bring out such a relatable warmth in their reunion, and I’m intrigued to see where Allison’s reflections on her relationships will lead. Looking forward to more chapters!

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Thank you.

Writing characters who arent the same is def a thing I'm working on.

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