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RE: LA Modern Noir: Chapter 7c - Allison
Quite nice, I understand this is a rough draft but some things really hurt me a bit to read😂😂😭
Allison held the glass to Shonda. She said, ‘Sit down, drink your wine, and leave my hair alone.'
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that is particularly egregious
that reads better
Indeed