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RE: LA Modern Noir: Chapter 5b Allison
Hmmmm
So it seems the ladies all have some sort of unsettling feelings and about their husbands line of work...
I've noticed this a few times in your writing...
I got to dance with (actor) once when he needed someone to practice with.’
The "(actor)", is it like you have no name for the actor yet or...
0.00140627 BEE
Anytime there's brackets it's a place to fill in a detail.
Happens most when I dont want to break a flow and get distracted by research.
If you see any such, feel free to make suggestions
Okay