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Most often, the writer may not be able to see those errors. π³ π
I have checked again and found some. I hope it looks better right now.
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I !HOPE that you correct responses to "response", but to "I", and some of my comments to "some comments" !INDEED! π€ While the word "observations" is okay, I still suggest that you change it to simply "observation". π !WEIRD !PIXY
I !HOPE that you correct
responsesto "response",butto "I", andsome of my commentsto "some comments" !INDEED! π€ While the word "observations" is okay, I still suggest that you change it to simply "observation". π !WEIRD !PIXYView more