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RE: Descent [Fiction]
Aye! If only Mark had listened to that irritating voice just once. Hehe!
But was it really help or was Mark drowning in the beyond? That latter soothes my sinister mind more Hehe.
Awesome reading from you again. You are impeccable.
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If only! The saying that the elderly see things the young do not holds true here. In his helpless condition, Mark longs for someone to come and the faintest sound creates the illusion that someone is at the door. Poor guy! Hehe. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind compliments on my story. ✨